重い魂… “A heavy soul…”

A Japanese calligraphy artwork with three lines of small vertical text.

重い魂 / A heavy soul

苦心の勝利 / A hard-fought victory

昔と同じものはない / Nothing’s the same as it used to be

This was a commission for a client to give to his beloved as a Christmas present. It’s three lines from their favourite song.

The song is originally in English, so before I wrote it I had the task of translating it into Japanese. I wanted my translation to:

  • sound natural
  • have the same “feel” as the original English
  • have similar line length

What do you think?

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